Problems and Improvisations Part 1

 

Although the first draft was quite decent, there were some changes that we felt like were needed. I wasn't the biggest fan of the voiceover, Maroosh suggested that we add subtitles, and our media teacher suggested that we should add another talking head to our film opening.

Here are the problems we pointed out that I displayed on a brainstorming template:

 

Our first draft gave us a good foundation to work with and these are the planned changes:

https://www.canva.com/design/DAFhWlaXzmI/view

 

1, Adding another talking head.

2, Changing the voiceover.

3, Adding subtitles